Shadow the hedgehog game review

I am doing a game review about Shadow the Hedgehog. It is a PS2 game aged 3+ but it is very hard. I am on level 3 and can't get past it yet. I would rate it 5 stars if I got a chance. It is an amazing game. I bet you will like it because it is great. You get to pick up weapons by just standing in the circle around it. You can go very fast with Shadow and you can make black tornadoes. But you can't control the tornadoes it will only stay in the place you made it. Some of the people you have to kill are hard but let me give you a tip if there is lots of men you can jump up in the air and press x repetidly and that will hurt the men (it won't kill them). And by the way it is 2 player. On 2 player you can be droids of Shadow or Shadow himself. This game is BRILLIANT! I couldn't live without it!

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